In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

The curfew is inflicted in some

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of the US and teenagers are obligated to stay

indoor

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night time unless they are gone along by an adult.

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, their freedom is limited but they could be safe

instead

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could be useful in unsafe areas to make

parents

confident their children are

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. In spite of development in some countries

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as the US,

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of children is one of

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issues yet what is mentioned by plenty of politicians.

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parents

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their own way. Whereas,

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teenagers

indoor

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is considered by pupils.

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as Seattle, the criminal threshold is utterly higher than

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,

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parents

to

being

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sure youths

to be

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safe.

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, teenagers are believed to behave less aggressive when they are with an adult and they would be under control.

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high risk

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children.

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behaviors

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youth are numerously higher than

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,

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approach would be effective, To sum up, I absolutely reckon

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way is not the best one which would

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, but

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is a good deed that

parents

are convinced their youth be safe in the hazard area.

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situation even

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of them would be not limited.

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point

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fact, freedom should be

also

considered.