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Introducing tourist attractions in Binh Dinh, Phu Yen, Nha Trang Practice 2: Some information on the trip to
ICISE
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 in Quy Nhon city, Binh Dinh province. Put the verbs in the Passive voice. International Center for Interdisciplinary Science and Education (ICISE) Based on the success of “Rencontres de Moriond” (since 1966) and “Rencontres de Blois” (since1989), in 1993, Professor Tran Thanh Van
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established Rencontres du Vietnam, allowing young Asian researchers to meet with world-class scientists. ICISE, which (1) ________ (design) by famous architect Francois Milou, (2) _________ (inaugurate) in August 2013. It (3) _______ (locate) on a site of
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20 hectares
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 unique inspirational and energizing atmosphere.
This
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 (4) _______ (
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) by thousands of people every year. Many meetings (5) ________ (
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) annually to bring science to a larger public, develop a love of science among the younger generation, and
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contribute to
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 the bases for the future development of the sciences in Vietnam.
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