Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Why it is needed to take tremendous initiatives through spending money on a few particular aspects of the governing authority? It is thought by some individuals that money is wasted by the government on arts and it should be better utilized. I agree

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many critical issues are issues that are required to be addressed. In my opinion, one is poverty and the other is the lack of infrastructure in healthcare.

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, among various kinds of facts, the concentration of poverty in the province is a big concern because it directly affects the economic growth of the nation and is caused by the sheer unemployment in the country and the absence of adequate facilities required for nurturing the people of a nation.

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, about 29% of the country's population is poor and deprived of basic amenities.

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is the fact that the government should take some significant measures for the several communities so that they at least get all the essentials, through these ways, folks' basic needs will be fulfilled.

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, money needs to be heavily funded in

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direction.

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, the inadequate infrastructure in the field of healthcare

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hit the nation hard as several diseases like

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, cancer, and other vulnerable infections are not

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easily cured.

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is all because of the lack of certain elements like hospitals, staff working them, and efficient technology for treatment.

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a statistical survey,33% of the people could not recover from

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and died because they were not admitted to the hospital because of the inability of beds for patients.

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, a bunch of thoughtful steps should be taken by our governing body to enhance the aforementioned facilities. To summarize, I opine,

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of spending on artistic works, if the ruling class expenses their finance to alleviate the impoverishment and medication sides, it would

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a pace to complete the public basic

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propensity can uplift the health of the country as a whole and develop the lives who live below the poverty line.