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You recently bought an electronic gadget for home purposes. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: -What is this gadget -What do you think about it -Give advice about other alternatives your friend can buy

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Dear Rahul, I am writing
this
 letter to provide you with an overview of the Amazon Echo 2, that I have bought
last
 week. It falls under the portable speaker category, but with an advanced voice recognition feature and can connect with the internet.
Furthermore
, you can play any music simply by giving commands to Alexa. I would always prefer everyone to purchase
such
 an amazing gadget for their home purposes. My whole family listen to their favourite songs on daily basis and my mother daily
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 their old songs.
Furthermore
, if you feel that it would an expensive option, in that case, you can go with Amazon Echo 1. Since it might be cheaper than
this
 one but will have similar functions and sound quality.
However
, the maximum sound might differ from the one that I have bought. Hope I might be able to bifurcate its advantages and you will be able to compare both options
accordingly
.
Moreover
, if you need more information, feel free to reach out. Yours Lovingly, Shivam
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