You recently bought an electronic gadget for home purposes. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: -What is this gadget -What do you think about it -Give advice about other alternatives your friend can buy

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Dear Rahul, I am writing

this

letter to provide you with an overview of the Amazon Echo 2, that I have bought

last

week. It falls under the portable speaker category, but with an advanced voice recognition feature and can connect with the internet.

Furthermore

, you can play any music simply by giving commands to Alexa. I would always prefer everyone to purchase

such

an amazing gadget for their home purposes. My whole family listen to their favourite songs on daily basis and my mother daily

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listen

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their old songs.

Furthermore

, if you feel that it would an expensive option, in that case, you can go with Amazon Echo 1. Since it might be cheaper than

this

one but will have similar functions and sound quality.

However

, the maximum sound might differ from the one that I have bought. Hope I might be able to bifurcate its advantages and you will be able to compare both options

accordingly

Moreover

, if you need more information, feel free to reach out. Yours Lovingly, Shivam

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

172 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Fully explain your ideas

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be oppened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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when a country develops its technologies, the traditional skills and ways of living die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?