Scientists believe that eating fast food is harmful to one’s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however, argue that education does not work. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there are many ailments caused by consuming different kinds of foods bought from restaurants. It is

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believed that educating the public might help while others think

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opine that education might be the way forward. The essay below will discuss both views at length.

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as agriculture where a lot of development has been introduced. For

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reason ,I, believe educating people about the dangers of eating fast meals might improve their health.

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, in Zimbabwe, schools introduced a programme termed ,'no fast food strong bones', where scholars are taught about eating healthy. So far, it is reported that a lot of tuck shops located in schools have started selling fruits and vegetable snacks.

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, education is the key to good health.

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, some individuals believe that educating society about the dangers of eating unhealthy foods may not help. Their reason is that even if people are taught they may still continue with their lifestyle. I,

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reason is invalid because most educated persons transform from bad habits.

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, a study by Musa Jones in 2018 proved that about 89 per cent of people change their behaviour after learning something new.

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, educating the public is another solution to reducing different diseases caused by the consumption of fast foods. To conclude, I trust educating communities should be a priority in reducing diseases caused by eating unhealthy. On the other side, some think

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to be true.The essay above has discussed these issues at length.

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