In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space avaliable for building is in the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?
There are many countries where there is required to rebuild
houses
but the only reason is capacity in that particular area. We will discuss about
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comes
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a particular
houses
needed. so is that case persons required some shelters or houses
where they can stay easily. For example
, more shelter is required when in a larger city people
comes from different area for the purpose of jobs and they want to set parmenant
in that city.
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permanent
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, In Correct your spelling
overcrowded
over crowded
cities there is no space available except Correct your spelling
overcrowded
rural
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in rural
areas
. people
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available
avaliable
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available
for example
hospital, schools, colleges, banks etc. people
prefer to settle in the middle of country
.
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the country
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houses
but they don't want to live rural
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in rural
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because of overpopulation. In my point of view
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facilities
facilites
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- although
- even though
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