Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What is the cause of this? What can be done?
Scientists prove there are some
activities
which have a positive rule on our health while others have abysmal results for humans, however
, still lots of people
around the world are participating in unhealthy activities
, which this
essay will discuss why people
still doing them and what can be done to make those wrong habits stop.
To begin
with, thousands of people
around the earth are enjoying doing activities
which are not healthy for their bodies, because they feel happy when they enrol in those activities
. For example
, smoking was always shown to people
as a bad habit which can make abysmal and profound problems and issues for your health but people
are still using it to reach that joy sense and happiness while they doing it. Thus
, most people
are doing those wrong activities
with people
they love and it is interesting for them to do it every time.
However
, there are a lot of ways to provide those people
to make them stop and aware of what dangerousness those actions can have. Thus
, making people
aware and giving them knowledge about why those habits are bad can prevent them from negative effects. For instance
, vaping is a type of electric smoke which is popular in Canadian high schools and government and schools boards are spending lots of money to make presentations for students to tell them not to use vaping or if they are using stop it. In the end, if people
know those activities
can cause cancer and damage their health they will stop.
To conclude, the major cause that can make people
do wrong and unhealthy activities
are because they enjoy doing that but if other people
or organizations are aware of the dangers of that activities
they will not do them again.Submitted by jaberi.mahyar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite