While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise for the accident, - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.

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Dear Ankit, I am writing

this

letter to confess to you about the bowl, which was broken by me accidentally when I was there in your apartment. Actually, while cleaning your living room with the vacuum cleaner, without being aware that it was on full suction speed and suddenly it hit the bowl.

Furthermore

, I wanted to make an apology for the damages that I have caused you. Everything happened suddenly, and I got scared, as I am aware of its market value. I am feeling shamed for not telling you at that point in time.

However

, I have gathered the courage now to face the consequences.

Moreover

, I have talked to the shopkeeper who sells these types of showpieces and they will bring the same tomorrow. I will bring the newer one for you. Hope you will be able to accept my apology and forgive me. I will meet you tomorrow evening with your brand new showpiece. Yours Lovingly, Shivam

Submitted by cshivam2675 on Mon Oct 03 2022

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