The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

Physcial
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Physical
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education
eudcation
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education
are having an important part
in
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school
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curriculum, It keeps students mental and
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physically
pyshcially
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fit. It should be required in every
school
. we will discuss and explain
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PE
in
this
essay . Nowadays, Physical education
is not provide
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in all
schools
because many
schools
are not focus
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that
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is
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part in
schools
. they focus on studies but
PE
is
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school like
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studies. Most
of
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schools
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offers
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this
programme.
This
plan plays an important role in
student
life. Every
student
should be healthy and active if they participate
PE
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classes on daily basis. It improves the
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stamina
of
body
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and
keep
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mind
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refresh
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. It
prevent
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students of different
kinds
of diseases and disorders.
For example
, if children do exercise on daily basis like in
schools
, it keeps them fresh,
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to think more, more active etc. so
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think every
school
should provide
PE
classes that make
student
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healthy and fit.
On the other hand
, most
of
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schools
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are not provide these
kinds
of
programme
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programmes
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and
in
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the
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result
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people are not
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physically
physcially
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physically
fit. They
are involve
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in different
kinds
of diseases. They are not mentally active to do any work.
for example
, if they don't care about health and body and they don't do exercise regularly, they become lazy and dull. In the class, they are not active and present mind. As the result,
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marks will become low. In conclusion, All
schools
should
offers
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these
kinds
of
plan
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.
This
should be required for every
student
to keep them fit and active in class and
home
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as well. if the
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children
childrens
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get energetic and more power to think , work and create , parents get
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satisfied
and happy. In my point of view ,
i
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agree that
schools
also
provide
PE
classes for every
students
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.
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