The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
Physcial
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Physical
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education
eudcation
are having an important part Correct your spelling
education
in
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of
school
curriculum, It keeps students mental and Add an article
the school
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physically
pyshcially
fit. It should be required in every Correct your spelling
physically
school
. we will discuss and explain about
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apply
PE
in this
essay .
Nowadays, Physical education is not provide
in all Change the verb form
is not provided
schools
because many schools
are not focus
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are not focused
are not focusing
that
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and
this
is
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also plays
also
plays major
part in Add an article
a major
schools
. they focus on studies but PE
is also
a part of Add an article
a school
school like
studies. Most Add a hyphen
school-like
of
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apply
schools
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the schools
offers
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offer
this
programme. This
plan plays an important role in student
life. Every student
should be healthy and active if they participate PE
classes on daily basis. It improves the Change preposition
in PE
satmina
of Correct your spelling
stamina
body
and Correct article usage
the body
keep
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keeps
mind
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the mind
refresh
. It Wrong verb form
refreshed
prevent
students of different Change the verb form
prevents
kinds
of diseases and disorders. For example
, if children do exercise on daily basis like in schools
, it keeps them fresh, ability
to think more, more active etc. so Replace the word
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i
think every Change the capitalization
I
school
should provide PE
classes that make student
healthy and fit.
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students
On the other hand
, most of
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apply
schools
are not provide these Add an article
the schools
kinds
of programme
and Fix the agreement mistake
programmes
in
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as
the
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a
result
people are not Add a comma
,result
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physically
physcially
fit. They Correct your spelling
physically
are involve
in different Change the verb form
are involved
kinds
of diseases. They are not mentally active to do any work. for example
, if they don't care about health and body and they don't do exercise regularly, they become lazy and dull. In the class, they are not active and present mind. As the result, there
marks will become low.
In conclusion, All Correct your spelling
their
schools
should offers
these Change the verb form
offer
kinds
of plan
. Fix the agreement mistake
plans
This
should be required for every student
to keep them fit and active in class and home
as well. if the Change preposition
at home
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children
childrens
get energetic and more power to think , work and create , parents get Correct your spelling
children
staisfied
and happy. In my point of view , Correct your spelling
satisfied
i
agree that Change the capitalization
I
schools
also
provide PE
classes for every students
.Change to a singular noun
student
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