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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really very important? Give reasons. Some people say that public speaking should be taught at school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Public speaking or giving a presentation in front of an audience is not so easy for everyone. Some people have to face difficulties during public appearances. I think public speaking skill is very much important nowadays to interact with the global world. Every youth has to improve their habit from childhood as it lasts for their whole
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. When a kid develops a habit during childhood they can carry and use it in their later
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 in a better way. It is quite difficult to adapt any competence in later growth for a human being.
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 why I think it is important to develop public speaking
skills
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 in school-going ,
children
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. Public speaking should be taught at school as a part of their
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syllabus syllabus
. They should practice it on a regular basis and not only teachers but
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 parents should monitor their
children
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 for their improvement. When a human gets adults they have to deal with their
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emotions emotions
. Some people may be very shy
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 some may get very
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arrogant arrogant
. It
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 on
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whether whether
 he/she is an introvert or an extrovert. In the
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 it's different for the
children
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. If the youth is introverted they can express
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themselves themselves
 with proper counsellingcounciling. If the kid could be trained properly they can improve their public speaking
skills
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 but it's very much difficult for adults. It the high time for school-going
children
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 to learn different things and develop different
skills
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. These
skills
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 will help them to survive in their later
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. When school-going
children
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 develop public speaking
skills
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 very well they can express themselves easily in their
life
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 and can overcome any challenges in their
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. It is definitely recommended that for everyone to develop public speaking
skills
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 from their childhood. I agree with
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 statement as in today's global world we have to
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communicate communicate
 with a large number of people to meet our daily needs.
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