More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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from
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for
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job
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than rural
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problems and solutions that how can we make
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life
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in urban
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, many
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transferring
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to urban
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makes
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life
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more difficult in search of
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job
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problems
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example, the foods and things are too expensive in urban places as compared to rural
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. houses rent are too high,
people
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hard to live for jobs and difficult to bear
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costly things. In urban places, school fees are too high that big
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can't afford
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expense.
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government
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the government
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Government
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provide jobs for
persons
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people
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who migrate from one city to another for
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better
life
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ministry look
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food budget and make prices low
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ordinary
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can afford
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very easily.
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houses
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rent makes normal. taxes should be controlled by
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government
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the government
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. All things under controlled by
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the country
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country
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makes citizen
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easier than compared
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rural
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where there
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all facilities available. In conclusion, Ministry is responsible for all
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should take care of citizens , make their
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better and
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as control their food budget, houses rent, taxes ,school fees etc. after that persons don't feel any difficulty and
people
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can migrate easily from other cities or rural
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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