More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, Most
people
are shifting with their family
from Fix the agreement mistake
families
other city
for Change the wording
another city
other cities
better
Add an article
a better
job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
This
makes life
more hard
than rural Replace the words
harder
life
. Government
should take action in this
matter. In this
essay
we will discuss Add a comma
,essay
about
problems and solutions that how can we make Remove the preposition
apply
better
Add an article
a better
life
in urban areas
.
First
, many people
are transfering
from rural Correct your spelling
transferring
areas
to urban areas
for better
carrier. Add an article
a better
This
makes them
Change the pronoun
their
life
more difficult in search of Replace the word
live
better
Add an article
a better
job
. They Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
faces
problems Change the verb form
face
for
example, the foods and things are too expensive in urban places as compared to rural Add the comma(s)
,for
areas
. houses rent are too high, people
hard to live for jobs and difficult to bear such
costly things. In urban places, school fees are too high that big family
can't afford Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
expense.
Secondly
, government
should take action in Add an article
the government
this
matter. Government
provide jobs for Add an article
The government
persons
who migrate from one city to another for Replace the word
people
their
better Change the word
a
life
. For example
, first
ministry look Change the article
the first
their
food budget and make prices low Change preposition
at their
that
ordinary Correct word choice
so that
people
can afford it
very easily. Correct pronoun usage
them
secondly
houses
rent makes normal. taxes should be controlled by Change the noun form
house
government
. All things under controlled by Add an article
the government
country
. Add an article
the country
country
makes citizen Add an article
the country
life
easier than compared to
rural Change preposition
apply
areas
where there is
all facilities available.
In conclusion, Ministry is responsible for all Change the verb form
are
this
, authority
should take care of citizens , make their Add an article
the authority
life
better and good
Change the adjective
well
such
as control their food budget, houses rent, taxes ,school fees etc. after that persons don't feel any difficulty and people
can migrate easily from other cities or rural areas
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