Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back.

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it
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for granted
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most
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people
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.
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, it would become
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. in my opinion , the advantage of
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overweight the disadvantage. on the one hand ,
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way for some
people
temporarily
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money to deal with some financial
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. if
people
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such
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a house or a car which
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sufficient money ,
credit
car is useful for
people
.
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,
credit
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is
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way to solve some financial
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people
on unemployment have to pay
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of living .
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,
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card
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people
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the risk of debt
who
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self-controlled. it does not news that lots of humanity
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out of their
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,because of the over
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expenditure
on something they want . one of
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reason
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of
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is to pay their debt back after
people
have
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something for a month . it
make
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people
lack
of
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real sense when they pay off the money and
further
lead to
the
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over spending
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. lasting the action of
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for
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term would cause a big financial
issue
. overall , I think that the advantage of
credit
card
overweigh the disadvantage , but the
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goverment
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government
and
company
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should give a correct lecture for some
people
.
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