Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am one of the students living in your town. Recently, I saw your advertisement regarding the help required for your home for a few hours a day in the

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summer season. I want to inform you that I am interested in

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role. Kindly note that I am used to doing household chores since my childhood days. As my mother is a working woman she has taught me all the house-related work and always motivated me to organise the things in the house really well.

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, I can do almost everything including cleaning, washing the dishes, organising the living area and much more. I would like to volunteer for

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work for you as I understand that you are well versed in the English language and I am currently learning the same at my home. Since I cannot afford a good coaching class to study English, I thought spending a day with you would be a great opportunity for me as well. Please note that I usually have my summer holidays in the month of June, so I can only be available on the dates from 11th June to 28th June. I hope you will consider me as one of the candidates for your assistance. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sania

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

219 words

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Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
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Work ethic
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