In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society?
There are many
people
that uses
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use
such
kind
of creams which make them white and Correct your spelling
shiny
shinny
. These Correct your spelling
shiny
products
have different side
effects on skin
. we will discuss Add an article
the skin
about
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apply
skin
products
and their side
effect in this
essay and alsi
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also
i
will share my point of view.
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First
, companies make different
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a different
type
of items which change their Fix the agreement mistake
types
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appearance
apperance
and make their Correct your spelling
appearance
skin
white. There are many creams, lotions etc that have different chemicals in their product which make them change. For example
, most people
who afford that kind
of product , purchase them and use them and later they become change their skin
colour, people
use bleach on their skin
to make them white. These products
are uses
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used
people
who can afford them easily otherwise
poor people
don't have importance these
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this kind
these kinds
kind
of items.
Secondly
, these products
may have bad
effect on society, these things have different Add an article
a bad
side
effects on skin
, Add an article
the skin
sometimes
bleach on Correct word choice
and sometimes
skin
may produce Add an article
the skin
ellergic
or rashes that Correct your spelling
allergic
looks
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look
skin
bad. for example
, that kind
of creams have harmful chemicals and when they apply on
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to
skin
after sometime
they Replace the word
some time
faces
problems like spots on Change the verb form
face
skin
and make them ugly. In my Add an article
the skin
opinion
we should stay away Add a comma
,opinion
these
harmful Change preposition
from these
products
.
In conclusion, these things have bad
impact on Correct article usage
a bad
community
and their Add an article
the community
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people
poeple
. Correct your spelling
people
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people
poeple
should accept what they are, companies Correct your spelling
People
makes
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make
profit
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a profit
of
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from
such
dangerous things and sell them for their benefit. most people
are fool
and buy from them and apply on their natural Add an article
a fool
skin
which they faces
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face
side
effect later. As a result
, we get to know that these
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this kind
these kinds
kind
of products
nothing
but a waste of money.Add a missing verb
are nothing
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