You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter Describe what you purchased Explain why you are not happy with the purchase Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation

Dear XYZ Company, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding my recent purchase of a Samsung Galaxy mobile phone from your company on the internet. I received the product yesterday from your delivery partner,
however
, when I unpacked the same, I noticed that the seal of the box was already open. As I inserted my sim into the smartphone and began scrolling through the installed apps, I found that the gallery was full of photos mostly related to a married couple. With
this
, I really got disappointed as I ordered a brand new product but I received a used one.
Therefore
, I would request you to look into the matter and inquire about
this
bad dealing by your organisation as
this
can happen with someone else as well. I
further
want you to return my money paid for the product or else replace it with a new one. I have enclosed my order details and bank statement snippet as evidence for payment. I hope you will take appropriate action on the above matter at the earliest as
otherwise
, I would have no option other than to make a formal complaint about it. Yours faithfully, Sneha
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