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3.Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging their common health. Somepeoplethinkthatthisproblemscanbesolvedbyeducatingpeopletoeatlessjunk food.Otherpeoplebelievethateducationwillnotwork.Discussbothopinionsandgiveyour own opinion

#scientists #people #junk #food #health #somepeoplethinkthatthisproblemscanbesolvedbyeducatingpeopletoeatlessjunk #otherpeoplebelievethateducationwillnotwork #discussbothopinionsandgiveyour
The line graph provides data on the proportion of student
enrollments
 in three different courses at a regional university from 1960 to 2020. Overall, the popularity of medicine increased during
this
 period while humanities experienced a significant decrease in the percentage of
enrollments
. Science remained relatively stable over the 60-year period. Medicine increased in popularity, starting at 20% in 1960 and reaching a peak of 35% in 2000. After
this
 point, it decreased slightly and finished at 30% in 2020. Humanities witnessed a very different trend. The
enrollments
 started at 45% in 1960 and decreased significantly over the period. The
enrollments
 fell to around 7 % in 2029, becoming the least popular course type. Science remained relatively stable, starting at 30% in 1960. The
enrollments
 decreased slightly over the
next
 40 years but returned to the same level in 2020 and were equally as popular as medicine.
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