Every year several language die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.
All countries in the world have
themselves
mother Correct pronoun usage
their
language
and some of them vanish every year. There are some Fix the agreement mistake
languages
people
who believe that life will be convenient without several languages. I completely disagree, because the language
is part of a culture and tourist
industry.
First
, the language
is significant for each country and it is part of its culture. If mother
tongue Correct article usage
the mother
being
removed from Wrong verb form
is
a
land, it will cause making Remove the article
apply
relationship
will be hard Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
to
Change preposition
for
people
. For instance
, the old people
can not speak to other people
because they are used to speak by their homeland’s language
in
whole their life Change preposition
for
therefore
, it is not easily
for them to learn Replace the word
easy
new
Add an article
a new
language
. On the other hand
, their culture will be destroyed and people
like to keep their civilization by having their special themselves
Correct pronoun usage
apply
language
.
The second
reason is that,
Remove the comma
apply
type
of dialogue between Correct article usage
the type
people
in a community it
is a portion of their Correct pronoun usage
apply
tourist
industrial
. Replace the word
industry
For example
, speaking Japanese is interesting for every one
who takes travel to Japan, Replace the word
everyone
as a result
, if this
language
die
out, it will be Change the verb form
dies
disadvantage
for Add an article
a disadvantage
business
of Add an article
the business
a business
tourist
attraction in this
country then
it
negative effect on their Change the pronoun
its
economic
.
In conclusion, some Replace the word
economy
people
agree with being limited
number of languages in the world, and they think can live easily Change the article
a limited
the limited
by
a few languages. I disagree with themChange preposition
with
,
because it makes many Remove the comma
apply
of
cultures undergo change Change preposition
apply
also
, it causes the fewer tourist
Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
go
to visit that community Fix the infinitive
to go
then
earning income from business
of Add an article
the business
a business
tourist
will be decreased.Submitted by TUTOO on
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