In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Public concern has arisen about whether governments should or shouldn't allow salaries above a certain level. I tend to believe that pay packages should not exceed a certain amount. Convincing arguments can be made that, not allowing pay packages after a certain point would make

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feel equal. Equal pay would encourage

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to do all kinds of jobs that are important. Some jobs are looked down on by society and fewer

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want to get into those careers because of judgment and not enough

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. A great example is construction workers, they work long hard hours for little

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and their work is extremely important to us because

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need all sorts of buildings. To ensure equality, employee remuneration shouldn’t cross a certain point.

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, an opportunity to earn higher amounts of

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would give workers motivation to put more effort into their job. Most

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work for the

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because not only can it

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basic human needs but

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help

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enjoy life. That would mean that if

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knew there was an opportunity to earn more

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, most would take it.

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, higher employee remuneration is beneficial to the country's economy.

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who earn higher salaries have to pay higher bills, so more

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would come back to the government. Allowing a big gap in pay packages can give more motivation to workers and benefits to the government. Having considered both perspectives allowing pay gap has advantages like employee motivation and economical advantage, but

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disadvantages like inequality

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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252 words

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incentivize
discrepancy
inequality
social cohesion
equitable distribution
wealth concentration
talent retention
global competitiveness
social unrest
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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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