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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, bit it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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In
this
 technological era, everything is developing with
passage
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 of time. Nowadays, the
internet
 has changed the method of sharing and consuming
data
 that create problems which are not experienced in the past. In
this
 essay, problems and their solutions will be discussed with suitable examples.
To begin
 with, in the previous years the only source of sharing information was radio but now there are many platforms like Twitter, Facebook and TV channels. Meanwhile, people speed
a
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lot of
rumers
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rumours
 about any type of news by using the
internet
.
For instance
, there
is
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are
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 different
data
 on different accounts about
current
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 problem happening in
the
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society
Therefore
,
this
 factor
cause
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causes
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 depression and anxiety in the population.
Moreover
, these days personal
data
 of youngsters has
leaked
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.
This
data
 is used in crimes.
For example
, sim card
number
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numbers
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 and
password
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passwords
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 of mobile phones are being used by
crimenals
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criminals
.
Therefore
, many innocents fell into
deep
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 end.
On the other hand
, there are some appropriate solutions.
Firstly
, the government should
banned
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the
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unofficial pages and groups on the
internet
.
Secondly
, everyone should have enough knowledge about the circumstances and not share their pin codes with anyone.
Thirdly
, the police should punish the involving people in
the
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cyber crimes. In the conclusion,
although
 the
internet
 has developed the way of
share
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 and
consume
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consuming
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 information
but
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there are many drawbacks as well.
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