you and your friend recently went on a holiday together you have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. write a lteer to ask your friend a particular photo and say. what is the problem with your photograph? which photo would you like from her? why do you need this photo?

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Introduction
Dear Amar,
Body paragraph 1
I hope you are doing good. Since we returned from our trip, we haven't met or spoken with each other . Anyway, I need your favour in sending me a photograph that we took near the ice-capped mountain in the Himalayas.
Body paragraph 2
Actually, I have that with me but unfortunately, it appears to be a bit blurred and the background doesn't look as original. I suppose
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may be due to the effects that we enabled on my camera.
Body paragraph 3
As I mentioned, I need the photograph or selfie that we took standing close to an ice-capped mountain, which was taken from your cannon. I believe that the candid image would be insta-worthy.
Body paragraph 4
To tell you the truth, the main reason why I need that photo is I want to make that image as a frame and put it on my shelf. I wish whenever I look at the image , I would remember the time which we had during the tour.
Body paragraph 5
I assume that you would surely send that to me at the earliest.
Body paragraph 6
Yours sincerely,
Conclusion
Denny.

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