Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

On the one hand, there are numerous good things about using tablets and smartphones like having access to various and limited references.
Furthermore
, it helps to speed up
learning
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process for
children
and
also
provides learning equipment
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everywhere. As we can see nowadays there are many websites and online pages that can be accessible through smartphones.
In addition
, using these new technologies requires no displacement for
children
to go to classes and reduces the chance of
any
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accident.
On the other hand
, the permission to use digital gadgets has certain drawbacks to mention. One of these drawbacks is that
children
are less sociable after using them because they are not in contact with many people.
Moreover
, if parents set no
limitation
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of any kind
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using digital gadgets it may be harmful
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their eyes and
also
has bad effects on their
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. These dangerous effects come from special websites that use a platform to teach what they want and guide
children
inappropriately.
Furthermore
, the existence of numerous references may confuse
children
and it may sound hard to select sources with the highest quality. In conclusion, it is true that it may have more disadvantages but
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think if we set some rules for using these
gadgetsand
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learn how to use them, the number of advantages would be significantly bigger .
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