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Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach cultural interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities, but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The given line graph provides the changes in domestic
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 to modern technology in four divisions
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 as CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet
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 in the UK from 1996 and 7 years later. Overall, it is obvious from the graph that all technology of domestic usage shows gradual increases. Three of which were used from 1996,
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, the usage of internet
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 started in 1998with about 10%. There was a moderate fluctuation in the mobile phones which began with about 18% and reached the highest peak with approximately 65% in the end. Two
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domestic technologies which are home computer and CD players demonstrate steady rises from 1996 to 2003 with approximately 20% boom each, while internet
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 and mobile phone present steep growths with about 35% each.
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