A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

Dear Son, I am writing to thank you for lending me the book for my
presentation
. If you remember, our managing director came to our room a week ago, and he asked me to prepare a
presentation
on "Best Web Application
Architecture
".
Although
I had good knowledge of various architectures, at that moment, I was pretty confused and you brought me a book the
next
day telling me that it would help me immensely. Indeed, it helped me a lot to deliver my
presentation
yesterday. The
presentation
was well appreciated by all the members attending it.
This
presentation
was not only for selecting the
architecture
for our
next
project, but it
also
was a kind of test of my ability to lead our team, which I successfully passed, and the management decided to promote me to the vacant team leader position. The book provided me with an in-depth comparison between the three-tier
architecture
and the two-tier
architecture
which I was somewhat confused about. Not only
this
, the pros and cons of these as well as other prominent architectures were well explained.
This
provided me with enough clarity on the topic and
hence
I was able to deliver one of my best presentations to date. Thank you once again for your help. Best regards, Mon
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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