Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
increasingly competitive society, more and more young people against
each other to Add a missing verb
are against
enroll
in Change the spelling
enrol
hall
, which is considered Add an article
the hall
as
a symbol of success in Change preposition
apply
study
stage. Add an article
the study
However
, some claim that universities should merely accept students
with the
flying Correct article usage
apply
colors
academic results, while others believe that every student should be provided with equal opportunities to access tertiary discipline. I will discuss both sides and outline my personal opinion in the essay below. Change the spelling
colours
Firstly
, high school students
with higher marks are far more deserved
to enter institutes Replace the word
deserving
instead
of dumb students
who are always slow on the uptake and cannot get head
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the head
nor
tail of what the teachers are explaining. Correct word choice
or
This
is because students
having a
good memory, logical thinking and management skills should be fostered and study intensively Correct article usage
apply
into
their aptitude fields, resulting in talented citizens who will contribute to the development of the national economy as well as scientific achievements in the future. Change preposition
in
Secondly
, by offering academy study to solely a limited figure for
Change preposition
of
students
, professors and tutors can easily evaluate the students’
level of ability and skills during the teaching process, resulting in high-quality graduates. Correct your spelling
student's
For example
, National
University of Medical, one of the most prestigious halls in Vietnam, only admit the top scorers in Correct article usage
the National
national
university entrance exam in order to make sure that all recruiters are well-qualified and able to deal with a huge amount of specialized knowledge. Add an article
the national
Nevertheless
, many people debate that only accepting young, academically-gifted individuals is unfair to students
who do not do well at school. The understandable reason is that performance at school does not reflect their potential to succeed at university. Thus
, it is immoral to decline enrolling requests from some students
, especially in this
society where formal degrees are considered to be more essential than hand-on
experience when it comes to recruitment. Correct your spelling
hands-on
Moreover
, offering higher schooling to high
proportion of young people not only open up an equal Add an article
the high
a high
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chance
change
for Correct your spelling
chance
students
to have better career prospects in the future,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
help maintain a diverse community, where each student is valued and rewarded for their abilities.Submitted by trancaomaitrang on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
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