Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To pursue the dream of being successful, people always think studying at
university
is the only way to
be succeed
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. But there is a problem rising among citizens. It is studying at
university
is only for
students
with flying
marks
at
school
, the others suppose that studying at
university
is for everyone at every age despite they are not educated or had a good
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at
school
. In m point of view,
university
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is a development area for all
kind
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of people
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just remarkable
students
. Having a
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knowledge
before
get
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into
university
is an advantage for everyone because
university
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is an academic place,
every
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argument or subjects
need
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to have the exact information in it. But having flying
marks
does not mean having a
widen
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knowledge
. The
knowledge
at high
school
is limited, every student can easily get high
marks
. But the opposite is true when you are in
university
.
Knowledge
in
university
is extremely wide, it is not easy for a person to get maximum points. One more certain thing is teachers in high
school
nowadays can help
students
increase their
marks
so
students
can easily get high scores without hard studying. As I mentioned before,
university
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is an environment for
academic
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academics
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, but not only
academic
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academics
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.
University
is
also
a place to improve lots of life skills. To illustrate
this
opinion, presentation is the work that every
students
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in
university
have to do once. While presenting, you can both revise the lesson you learned and improve your public speaking skill,
in
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which will help you in finding jobs in future. Another reason is in
university
, the time you were a freshman you will learn all
basic
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lessons of your career. So having flying
marks
at high
school
is meaningless
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because
beacuse
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because
in
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university
, you have the same starting point as others. In conclusion, studying at
university
is a big chance for anyone who
want
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to pursue their career, not just for young
students
with
highest
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marks
.
University
is a tool for everyone, a short way to get to their dream.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • competitive environment
  • academic standards
  • innovation
  • diversity
  • mature students
  • equitable
  • inclusive admission policies
  • educational disadvantages
  • holistic admission process
  • extracurricular achievements
  • non-traditional students
  • equal opportunities
  • societal progress
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