Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Now days
, Correct the word
Nowadays
the
sport is a major issue Correct article usage
apply
of
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in
societies
because Fix the agreement mistake
society
the
sport has Correct article usage
apply
beneficial
influence on Add an article
a beneficial
the
lifestyle. It is often said Correct article usage
apply
better
way to have Add an article
a better
healthy
and fit body you join Correct article usage
a healthy
gyms
while others say doing everyday activities is suitable for being fit. We will consider both sides of the discussion this
essay.
On the one hand, those who support Change preposition
in this
exercise
in health
clubs
for
keep fit promote we should go to Change preposition
to
gyms
because, it leads us to devote track of time to sporting, so it will be our routine activity in the
life. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, employees used to go to health
clubs
for exercise
in
Change preposition
at
especial
times after their work. Correct your spelling
special
Furthermore
, proponents of sport
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sports
clubs
claim that there are trainers in gyms
always. Also
, anybody can exercise
safely under coaches’
supervision. Correct article usage
the coaches’
For instance
, trainers can according
athletes’ physical conditional set up the scheme. To supporters of Add the preposition
toaccording
this
idea, these benefits are convincing.
On the other hand
, opponents of joining fitness
clubs
to keep fit cite who
do Correct pronoun usage
those who
every day
activities in Replace the word
everyday
Add an article
the work
work place
like Correct your spelling
workplace
that
walking, climbing stairs including Correct determiner usage
apply
activity
of sporting Add an article
the activity
therefore
, they do not need Add the comma(s)
,therefore
register
at Fix the infinitive
to register
gyms
. For example
, some activities such
as jogging can be done out
Correct your spelling
outdoor
door
and it is enough to keep in shape. Add an article
the door
Moreover
, critics of joining health
clubs
for fitness
assert that people have to pay tuition while they can exercise
freely everywhere they want by seeing social medias
films. Opponents point to evidence from American people Change the noun form
media
can
see Correct pronoun usage
who can
the
YouTube and, training comfortable. Correct article usage
apply
This
argument also
appears to be quiet
powerful.
In conclusion, I would tend to side with the proponents of Correct your spelling
quite
fitness
clubs
.it seems that coaches can prevent physical damages
in sporting times by athletes’ observation. Fix the agreement mistake
damage
Although
,
some believe that Remove the comma
apply
exercise
can be done everywhere if you go to gyms
, you will pay fees, but it is like investing on
your body’s Change preposition
in
health
and fit fitness
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