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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays, a large number of
animals
 are being diminished or even vanished. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the cause of
this
 social issue and how to solve it. To commence with, it is irrefutable that the environmental problem known as
climate
change
 is the biggest reason
of
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animals'
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animals
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 extinction.
Climate
change
 has slowly destroyed forests. Due to the destruction of wildlife
habitat
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, numerous
animals
 lose their homes. The most representative case would be the polar bear. Owing to the melting of Arctic ice, they have lost their habitat and drowned to death. Not only
Climate
change
 but
also
 immoderate hunting is
also
 a big reason
of
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 making
animals
 endangered. It is actually forbidden by law in many countries.
For instance
, Japan strictly prohibits
the
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whale hunting to protect
the
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 population of them, which has been severely reduced by excessive hunting.
On the other hand
, there are still solutions to solve the problem of protecting endangered
animals
.
Firstly
, the government should legislate the
environment
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 law. It is obvious that severe punishment can prevent people to harm
animals
.
Furthermore
, the government have to run a protection organization. In
this
 project, people in
organization
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 create a makeshift habitat for endangered
animals
 until their population will have been getting recovered. To sum up, the reasons
of
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extincted
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extinct
 or endangered
animals
 are
bacause
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because
 of
Climate
change
 and
over-hunting
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overhunting
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.
Thus
, in order to solve the problem, the most important factor is the active involvement of the government.
This
 is because only encouraging at the national level leads to the participation of many people.
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