A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

• In our modern life, many places all over the world depend on

tourism

as a most significant reference of revenue. Regrettably,

tourism

can

also

be a source of

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if it is not well-managed. From my point of view,many

tourists

bring a lot of advantages to the host

country

,

moreover

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it invited some disadvantages as well, which cannot be ignored. In

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essay , I will discuss the pros and cons of

tourism

. • There are a number of significant benefits of

tourism

.

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nowadays it has become a trend as

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people plan their holidays in different countries.

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It helps host countries to increase their economy and benefit local citizens.

First

and foremost, the government earns the largest amount of money through the

tourists

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their host nations.

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if

visitors

visit somewhere they have to pay

out

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the money to purchase hotels tickets and other necessities when visiting a

country

besides

, many

tourists

come, more the exchange of gross domestic products of the

country

develops, and their arrival helps to make the

country

’s name known to the world. • Turing to the other side of the argument despite

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benefits it

also

has it

is disadvantages

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.

First

of all, humans from

another countries

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can have a big impact on that

country

’s culture.

For instance

, if European

tourists

come somewhere they definitely influence the culture of the

country

in which they dress, speak and behave.

This

causes people to lose their good habits.

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the majority of

tourists

desire to go amazing sightseeing which is scenic sports near seas and oceans. And

visitors

also

cause great damage to the environment, because when

tourists

went to

this

kind of

sights

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,

they

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garages throw away oceans or rivers. It is extraordinarily terrible everywhere. • In conclusion, having mentioned up and I can come to

conclusion

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the conclusion

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that most of

visitors

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the visitors

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come very handy for nations budget. From my point of view, there are more benefits than disadvantages of visiting

tourists

, because the more

visitors

visit, the more popular the place becomes like Paris or Dubai.