Some people work for the same organisation all their lives.Others think it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While working for the same
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or different companies is a matter of choice, it has its own advantages and disadvantages.
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essay will throw some light on both views along with my opinion. In my opinion, working for the same institution has its own benefits. People who work for the same
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, enjoy many perks and rewards bestowed upon them, for their loyalty and contribution to the
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.
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, they have job security which leaves them satisfied with their job.
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, they are able to give their best which helps the
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in the long-term survival in the industry.
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, sometimes working in the same
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leads to monotony, and often kills the creativity of an individual, which harms both the employee and the
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in the long run. Working for different organisations has its own benefits.
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, the person can learn so much from his new job in a different
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which leads to upskilling and improves the worker's chances of getting a promotion and much better career progression.
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,
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too comes at a cost. The worker sometimes is unable to adjust to the new
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, owing to differences in the work culture. To conclude, both approaches have their own advantages and disadvantages ,
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however
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the benefits of working in different organisations far outweigh the advantages of working in the same
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. So, in my opinion, a person should always aspire to work with different organisations as it brings out the best in that individual.

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