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Topic 3: the best way to resolve significant environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#topic #cost #fuel
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There are many environmental
problems
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 which affect all over the world. Some
people
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 think that these
problems
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 can be solved if the
cost
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 of fuel
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 as petrol has increased. From my perspective, since increasing the price of unrenewable sources will not change anything, I strongly disagree about
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 solution.
People
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 need fuel for many reasons like transportation and heating. That's why rising the
cost
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 does not help to reduce these needs as still they have to use for these purposes.
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, the increased prices can lead to chaos in a nation.
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, Iranian
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 started to protest against the government after the new high prices for weeks in 2017, and these protests not only happened in Iran but
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 in other developing countries.
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, changing the price does not help the factor of usage.
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, there are several useful ways to solve these important issues. Environmental
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 occur mostly because lack of consciousness which is directly relevant to education. If the seminars were given by authorities, these
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 could decrease since
people
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's awareness would be more.
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,
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 of increasing the
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, it is better to put some limits ,especially on the factories which remarkable bad impact on nature. The effects of factories should be recorded regularly and these recordings need to inspect by a national organization. In conclusion,
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 environmental
problems
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 are a huge topic and must be handled, I completely believed that increasing the
cost
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 of fuel does not resolve it.
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