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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

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In
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 contemporary world, it’s very significant for every human being to know the difference between right and wrong so that anybody can take their decision wisely. At
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 stage, children should learn about good and bad.
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 is important to help them to learn
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 diversity. I agree that
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 a great role in shaping their future. It is to be said that
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, and they should educate their
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 about
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life
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 so that their
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. To illustrate
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 should tell their
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 that they should not spend much time
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watching television,
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 or playing games. They should teach the
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 about their culture, religion, and traditions.
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 is the not only solution to explain a
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right and wrong. Sometimes
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 their issues from their
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 since they get in
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 because of the
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. guardians should instruct their
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 in a
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 and gentle way.
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, teachers
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 because they guide them
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. Teachers should teach children to obey and respect their
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, elders, and relatives.
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 their job to tell the
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 to keep its surroundings and things tidy. They should teach them to always speak the truth and be kind and passionate. Teachers can punish the student, but it should not be severe. Like they can give them extra homework, or they can take their pocket money from them. In conclusion, sometimes
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 makes a
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 better in their career, but it can
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 should understand the nature of their offspring and treat them in a way so that they can easily understand their teachings.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Morality
  • Responsible
  • Psychological impact
  • Reinforcement
  • Positive discipline
  • Cultural perceptions
  • Punitive measures
  • Empathetic understanding
  • Personality development
  • Caregivers
  • Legal boundaries
  • Ethical boundaries
  • Behavioural correction
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Corporal punishment
  • Time-out
  • Grounding
  • Behavioral modeling
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