In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who desided to do this.

Many young people around the world take a

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off between finishing high school and beginning

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to travel or

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can have many advantages like gaining real-life experience, it can

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mean falling a

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behind academically. In

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essay, will discuss what I consider to be the benefits and drawbacks of taking a

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year

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with, taking a

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after graduating from high school can be

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beneficial

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beneficial

before embarking on

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study. Whether it can be travel or

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,

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would allow young people to be independent and learn about themselves which will

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help in carrier choices.

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, travelling allows young people to grow through experiencing and overcoming challenges.

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experience provides lifetime experience like real-life skills that will help to gain theoretical knowledge to the practical knowledge they are going to get at

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the

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may be irrelevant to future aspirations, learning how to deal with customers,

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and taking responsibility are all valuable tools for any student or worker.

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, for every positive, there is a negative.One flip side of taking a

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gap

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is falling behind a

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academically .

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means starting one's

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program a

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later and

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graduating from

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a

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later than one's peers.

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of that there may be financial drawbacks. Some scholarships,

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, do not allow students to defer, so the decision to take a

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gap

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might be the loss of the grant, which

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long-term debt. In

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taking a

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off after high school can bring about significant financial and personal benefits, despite the potential problems in terms of falling behind a

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acdemically

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academically

. As long as an individual is aware of their future direction, a

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year

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can be extremely rewarding.