The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the changing numbers of electrical types of equipment and householders and how much time was spent doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the percentage of the three categories has been increasing over decades,
whereas
the amount of
hours
has decreased by 2019. In the first graph, in 1920 washing machine was the most common among three appliances, showing about 40%,
while
the rate of
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refrigerator
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was about 0%. By 30 years, the proportion of vacuum cleaners and washing machines rose slightly, and the number of refrigerators saw a significant rise
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about 55%. In 1980, it reached a peak of 100%, between 1900 and 2000 ownership climbed steadily and it did reach 100%.
However
, the rate of machines ended up at 75% approximately in 2019. In the second graph, by ,contrast
hours
spent householding fell remarkably from 50 to 15
hours
between 1920 and 1980.
Hours
per week dropped by 5% in the
last
year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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