You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done
Hello Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express a challenge I encountered during my stay at your hotel. I work with Lufthansa Airlines and our company had a business meeting at your hotel from 25th to 28th September 2022. I lodged in room 2015.
During my stay, my air conditioner was not working and the room was very hot.
As a result
of that, I couldn't sleep on the first
day. I informed the receptionist who was on duty that day and she brought in a repairer to fix the air conditioner but to no avail. In addition
, the water heater was also
not working and that also
needs fixing. Moreover
, the rooms were infested with mosquitos, and when I complained to the receptionist, nothing was done to curtail the problem.
It is for this
reason, I am writing to humbly request that you replace the air conditioner with a new one. The water heater needs fixing immediately as winter is fast approaching and nobody can use the shower during intense winter. Also
, the place needs to be disinfected with pesticides to get rid of mosquitoes and to make the area user-friendly for anyone who comes to stay there.
Thanks for your understanding would it be possible to get feedback from you?
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite