You are planning a holiday and want to find out about the kinds of holiday packages that can be arranged by a local company. Write a letter to the company to ask for information about the holiday packages they offer. In your letter: say where and when you would like to go include details about the kind of holiday you would like to take say what kind of information you would like to receive You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in booking my next
vacation with your travel company. I request you to get a brochure for a wide range of available vacation packages. I am referred to your organisation by my colleague who had a pleasant experience on his last
trip.
I planned a holiday trip to Scotland from the 25th of December until the 1st of January. I am keen on visiting places with historical monuments and sites that are driven by nature, where I will enjoy cycling and hiking. Also
, I would like to explore places near to seashore.
Nevertheless
, I would like to receive a catalogue that lists the places I will visit. In addition
, I will need a guide with excellent knowledge of the local history and food. Also
, could you please let me know the type of accommodation that will be provided while on the trip?
I would request to share the information mentioned above and its associated cost.
I look forward to receiving all the details from your company.
Kind regards,
Vivek VSubmitted by vivekv4 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite