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The government should provide free public transport facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#government #transport #facilities #traffic #congestion
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With globalization, the number of public transportation has greatly increased from before. some
people
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 believe that giving free outgoings to public
transport
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 help enhances to reduce traffic jam while remaining
people
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 argued pay a lot of money for public
transport
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 can not respond to individuals issue. I completely agree to support that government should pay some money for transportation
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, transportation can help
transport
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 many
people
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 too far away and easy to reach but nowadays, there are many
people
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 who have a private
car
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, which affects travelling on the street
in other words
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, traffic congestion.
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, the period from Monday to Friday is the time that many
people
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 have to go to work in companies and businesses at the same point, which
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 problem can be fixed by having a public
car
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 or bus.
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, the government should pay attention to manage about public
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. due to, coming in of public
transport
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 can help to reduce the problem for
people
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 who want to go the same place, which the government should have measures that can attract attention a group of
people
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 using private
car
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 changes to use the public
car
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instead
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.
for instance
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, giving free service for
people
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 using public
transport
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 is advertising for
people
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 to turn to public welfare because using the private
car
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 every day have to pay a lot of money about fuels and various insurance.
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, can still decrease air pollution from many cars on the street. In conclusion, giving a free service can convince
people
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 to turn to use the facility of the public
car
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, which is the traffic jam issue and air pollution.
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