You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear friend, I just wanted to let you know that I've started to work for a new company called IBM which is a multinational software company. I was searching for a job since
last
year. Well, I was speaking about
this
when I met you
last
time. I didn't get a proper increment in the current appraisal.
Also
, I'm not satisfied with the technology and the role. That's why I've changed to a new job. Currently, I am working as
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developer on a payments project. I'm very much satisfied with the compensation and the role. you know the team is very supportive and there is progressive learning too. I've arranged the party and planned a movie night to celebrate my achievement. I know you are a movie buff. All of our friends are coming house
next
Saturday at 9 p.m. I would be very happy if you could join the party let me know if you can come and join the party. Best regards, Sindhu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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