The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

The
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also
known as the World Wide Web, takes a remarkable place among
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sources.
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people who looking for new opportunities, the
internet
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everyone in the world with easy access. But the concern is, we need to make sure whether the
information
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internet
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reliable and
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the capability to extract
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only truthful
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. But finding and extracting
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truthful
information
cannot be done by everyone, it depends on the experience
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it. But one way to
control
the truthfulness of the
information
is to regulate them. When talking about the
information
reliability of the
internet
, we can identify the
internet
as an open complex platform. The reason is, it is available for everyone across the world without any limitation, and it does not have any strict rules/
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and
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control
system
when posting something on the web. Considering those facts, we can say that all the
content
on the
internet
cannot be true. Since most of the services are
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on advertising, business, and
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of users, they are not trying to regulate or validate the
content
posted on their pages/websites. But that doesn’t mean, all the
information
on the
internet
is false, some
information
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truthful
information
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time.
For example
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Youtube can contain both reliable and false
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Wikipedia is among the top reliable
information
source. When considering the truthfulness of
information
, it is very important to
control
and regulate the
information
online. The reason behind the statement is false
information
can cause problems like wrong
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. But technically, it is not possible since
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is quite big and no one has
control
over it. You have
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only what you have owned. Anyway, there are some ways to
control
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online.
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way is having
automated
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reviewing
system
to monitor and analyze the
content
. When someone
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some
information
on the
internet
, the automated
system
will validate it
first
. It will save human effort and
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way in the long run. The automated
system
may have limitations when reviewing visual and audio
content
. In that kind of
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, we may need to have
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reviewing
system
. To conclude, the
internet
is one of the best sources of
information
that can be found easily and since it
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globally, lots of opportunities
also
there. Finding
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truthful
information
is not easy and not hard for
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people who
fluent
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in using it. There are ways to
control
the
information
on the
internet
, but It is not technically possible to do that on
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unless you owned the platform that posted the
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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