Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some believe that shopping at
malls
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are very costly where the same item can be bought at the local market for less
price
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while some other think big
malls
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are good for buying products.
Quality
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matter more than the
price
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for the big
shops
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however
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maintenance and rent are very high compared with small
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.
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essay is going to describe why some prefer going to the mall and why the goods are more expensive than individual
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.
Firstly
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, the Material and
service
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they provide are more important than the
cost
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of the item because
malls
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want their sales to increase by providing
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good response to the customers, each and everything is going to check before it was placed on display.
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, if buyer like the
quality
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then
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next
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time they will be searching for the same brand which in return increase their sales.so some group feels comfortable while shopping in
malls
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on the other hand
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, the
cost
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is higher for the products at big shopping
malls
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because of the store's infrastructure and located at an important location in the city while local
shops
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order everything in buck , the location,and infrastructure does not matter much .
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, when an item is bought at local
shops
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because they won't invest much for their
quality
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and the
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rather they want to purchase goods which are less
cost
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while
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is not the case with big stores because they want everything to be perfect with respect to
quality
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and the
service
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.But I believe the same because big
shops
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sell their products at a higher
price
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than the local
shops
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. In conclusion,big
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have higher prices whereas the same we get it at a lower
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because there are a lot of factories which increase the
price
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in big
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such
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as the
quality
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and
service
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they offer while
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is not the case with local
shops
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so goods are cheaper and some feel
malls
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are the best place for shopping.overall My opinion is the same as those who think shopping in small
shops
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we can spend less money on the clothes which we want.
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