Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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modern life, few individuals navigate most of their lives living close to where they were born. Because

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the majority of inhabitants prefer to

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to

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countries than

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life in the

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where he was born. From my point of view, there are

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a lot of advantages than disadvantages and in

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essay, I will examine both pros and cons of living in

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another country which is located near their hometown. • There are a number of significant benefits of spending a lot of time near your homeland.

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somewhere. For

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reason, by living in other countries, humans improve their

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, see the

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around them and learn to deal with them.

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, there is a big difference between a

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who has been to all countries and a

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who is with foreign

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and a

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who is only in his birthplace. Another

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is it gives

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the opportunity to

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abroad.

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, if you do not have the opportunity to

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where you live, you definitely want to live in a

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where there are enough opportunities to

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. • Turing t the other side of the argument despite its benefits it

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of all, if a

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live

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or

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in another

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, she definitely misses her homeland and her family members or her parents. It was one of the most terrible

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every

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’s life.

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, my sister lives and studies not far from where we live, but we don't see her very often, and I think that's too bad. • In conclusion, having

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weighted

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everything mentioned up and I can come to

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that even if you live far away from home, it is extremely worthwhile to go somewhere else to

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or work or relax. From my point of view, a

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should not live only in one

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, and should

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get to know other places it will be useful for everybody.