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Nowadays, people prefer buying new items rather than repairing the damaged ones. What are the causes of this change ? what are its effects?

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Тhe given bar chart presents us the
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 of children attending different spheres of sport
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 as tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, football and hockey. The difference in attendance is shown between
girls
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 and
boys
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 in an English town in 2012. It is pretty noticeable that despite having different preferences, females in England participate in sports activities not less than males. In witness of
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 we can see in the chart that swimming is the most prevailing game among
girls
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. And the same thing is noticed about football, but
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 time among
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.
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, hockey is mentioned as the less popular sport activity among both genders. As all over the world,
boys
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 prefer playing football, rather than other sports, since their amount in the chart is the highest (around 60), while
girls
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 show us a much lower
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 at around 20.
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, guys give more attention to tennis and cycling as well unlike
girls
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 whose quantity diverges from about 13 in cycling to 18 in tennis. When it comes to badminton, here
girls
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 demonstrate more desire than guys, as the interval between them is about 10 children in favour of young ladies. In conclusion, it is worth noting that in England
girls
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 are just as involved in sports as
boys
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 are in some countries. And in some areas, even the
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 of
girls
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 exceeds the
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 of
boys
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, which contributes to the development of healthy youth in the future.
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