Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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For example
, there is a big difference between a person
who has been to all countries and a person
who is with foreign people and a person
who is only in his birthplace. Besides
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite