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Nowadays many people hesitate to buy a house or rather to rent it . Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #house #rent
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In the present circumstances, to be the owner of a
house
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 or either to
rent
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 a
house
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 are decisions that
people
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 hesitate to take. In the essay., I will discuss both views and I will give my opinions.
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 and mostly, owning a
house
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 is very expensive and there are many associated costs related
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 as taxation, renovation and maintenance which are quite costly.
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, when someone owns a
house
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, he can accommodate the
house
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 to his choice without worrying about the regulations of a landlord.
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, owning a
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,require that some
people
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 have to pay mortgages which are expensive and risky as well.
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, during the pandemic lockdown, some
people
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 lost their jobs and could not repay their loans.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 cannot afford to buy a
house
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, so they choose to
rent
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 a
house
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. Unfortunately, the cons of renting a
house
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 are that there are regulations set by a landlord which can be inconvenient for the renter. Luckily, the charge of maintenance and renovation is the charge of the owner of the
house
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, relieving the lessees' cost. Many
people
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 prefer to
rent
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 a
house
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 because of the nature of their work which requires them to travel a lot. In conclusion, the pros and cons of owning and renting a
house
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 are more or less on the same level. Some
people
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 wish to have their own
house
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 but unfortunately due to a shortage of money, they have no choice but to
rent
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. Buy on the other side, renting a
house
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 have
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 its advantages as well.
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