The influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Today,
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man has done miracles on
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mother earth to make human
life
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this
humanbeing
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human being
has increased
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interference
into
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world's
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the world's
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ecosystem which has altered
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biodiversity and raised
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mark
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on
existence
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the existence
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of some
species
. One of the major and most precious
cause
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causes
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is urbanisation and deforestation.
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To begin
with,urbanisation is reaching
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a new pinnacle day by day and due to
this
cutting down of trees and
deforestations
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deforestation
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is increasing behind the doors.
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is directly causing a question mark for the small birds and
species
living their
life
depending upon those forests and they have to migrate to
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world for surviving which may cause their
life
and ultimately
such
species
are vanished
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from mother earth.
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,
sparrow
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,an ideal example of extinction, was widely seen all over in town and even in big cities but
unfortunately
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it
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can hardly be seen
on
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some particular parts. The extinction of particular
species
and human being influence can be taken care
if
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proper measures are taken.The authorities can apply heavy
fine
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against illegal
deforestations
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deforestation
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.
Moreover
, running
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a campaign
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campaign
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campaigns
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with the help of NGOs and celebrities to influence citizens is
also
good
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a good
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way to spread awareness.
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number
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of tigers in India had decreased dramatically some years back and
government run
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intense campaigns and programs to save tigers,
as a
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result
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surge in the
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number
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of tigers is seen now. To conclude, though development is necessary for any country but not
on
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the name of
life
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the life
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of any living creature on mother earth and biodiversity should be intact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystem
  • extinction
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • contamination
  • overexploitation
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • non-native
  • safeguard
  • eco-friendly
  • sustainable
  • legislation
  • rehabilitation
  • endangered species
  • conservation
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • biodiversity loss
  • ecological balance
  • sanctuary
  • environmental degradation
  • policy implementation
  • wildlife protection
  • ecotourism
  • biodiversity conservation
  • ecological footprint
  • sustainable development
  • pollinator decline
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