The influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Today,
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black-headed
black headed
man has done miracles on Add a hyphen
black-headed
the
mother earth to make human Correct article usage
apply
life
comfortable and to achieve this
humanbeing
has increased Correct your spelling
human being
its
interference Correct pronoun usage
their
into
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in
world's
ecosystem which has altered Correct article usage
the world's
the
biodiversity and raised Correct article usage
apply
question
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a question
mark
on Fix the agreement mistake
marks
existence
of some Add an article
the existence
species
. One of the major and most precious cause
is urbanisation and deforestation. Fix the agreement mistake
causes
This
essay will discuss major causes and all the possible causes to reverse them in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with,urbanisation is reaching to
a new pinnacle day by day and due to Change preposition
apply
this
cutting down of trees and deforestations
is increasing behind the doors.Fix the agreement mistake
deforestation
This
is directly causing a question mark for the small birds and species
living their life
depending upon those forests and they have to migrate to new
world for surviving which may cause their Add an article
a new
the new
life
and ultimately such
species
are vanished
from mother earth.Change to the active voice
vanish
have vanished
For instance
,sparrow
,an ideal example of extinction, was widely seen all over in town and even in big cities but Correct article usage
a sparrow
unfortunately
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,unfortunately
it
can hardly be seen Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
some particular parts.
The extinction of particular Change preposition
in
species
and human being influence can be taken care if
proper measures are taken.The authorities can apply heavy Change preposition
of if
fine
against illegal Fix the agreement mistake
fines
deforestations
. Fix the agreement mistake
deforestation
Moreover
, running Add an article
a campaign
campaign
with the help of NGOs and celebrities to influence citizens is Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
also
good
way to spread awareness. Add an article
a good
For example
, number
of tigers in India had decreased dramatically some years back and Change the article
the number
government run
intense campaigns and programs to save tigers, Add a hyphen
government-run
as a
Change the verb form
resulting
result
surge in the Add the comma(s)
,result
numbers
of tigers is seen now.
To conclude, though development is necessary for any country but not Fix the agreement mistake
number
on
the name of Change preposition
in
life
of any living creature on mother earth and biodiversity should be intact.Correct article usage
the life
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