Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

It is undeniable that

art

plays a vital role in human history as well as in our culture.

Therefore

, I am of the opinion that educators have to enable children to learn about

art

in their learning environment.

However

, other subjects

also

should be equally encouraged to focus,

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order to achieve an educational balance. In

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essay, I will enumerate my reasons below.

First

of all,

art

is the

first

communicating tool developed by humans,

hence

learning about

this

knowledge

is an irrefutable subject. Cave

art

is the earliest cultural heritage of communication, kids learn to draw even before they start talking,

therefore

learning

art

improves

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communication skills.

Secondly

, one of the most significant benefits of

art

is the stress relieving effect for kids. According to some scientific articles, music

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instance, improves a mood and the brain produces a substance called dopamine which helps people relax and give them a joyful feeling.

Additionally

, a major reason for having

art- related

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experience which triggers creativity,

such

as painting, crafting and singing.

However

, in the modern world

art

solely can not develop

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abilities to the fullest. In my opinion,school curriculums should focus equally on every valuable field rather than encouraging particular

knowledge

. Some lessons like mathematics and English are mandatory for every person to survive in our society. Kids will learn simple calculations and writing skills thanks to these subjects,

hence

they will be able to express themselves fully without any barriers. Every child

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different interest and ability ,

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knowledge

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encouraged to learn could be various. We would be one step ahead if we can determine child`s interests early as possible, and try to develop them more professionally at an early age. In conclusion, learning about

art

should play a vital role in the school`s curriculum,

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we should balance all the

knowledge

and try to give children general education to encourage their survival skills in a real life.