Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

The advances made in

field

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of

technology

is

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not equally shared by all age demographics. It is true that some

elders

still struggle

using

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to use

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new

technology

,

however

in my opinion older people

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, in particular,

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in particular

could benefit more in terms of convenience and

this

could be achieved by organisations transitioning their

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primarily online. Improved capability with using

internet

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the internet

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engenders better life quality.

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improvement would be immediately evident when having

service

online.

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example is shopping for food online, during

pandemic

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the pandemic

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lot of

elders

pushed

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to use

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technology-based

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technology based

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technology-based

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services

in order to buy food. Ordering online benefits them in many ways which they can remain at home

avoid

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covid19 risks. Even after pandemic

restrictions

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there is a report that

elderly

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the elderly

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continues

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to use online

services

for their convenience.

Second

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is apply

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for

monthly

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a monthly

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pension through

government

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the government

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application e-

mongolia

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Mongolia

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,

this

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eased

lot

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of time and effort.

Usually

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this

service

took about 1-2 days offline, but with

government

application

elders

can apply for it online while enjoying

a

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apply

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quality time with their grandchildren. In order to encourage

elderly

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the elderly

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to use consumer electronics, organisations should continue

support

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consumers to engage online. Older individuals will need extra support with new

technology

or

service

,

therefore

it would be easier for them if someone could demonstrate

illustrative

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an illustrative

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example

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examples

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for them.

For instance

,

government

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a government

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application called e-

mongolia

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Mongolia

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created a help

center

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centre

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specifically for

elders

to help them

adapt

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adopt

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new

services

on their phones. Companies today are already increasingly emphasising online orders by phasing out in-person discounts and physical stores they will compel the elderly to adapt to modern conveniences. To conclude, older individuals can lead easier lives if they utilize the achievements in

technology

that

government

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governments

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and companies

already begun

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began

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to embrace.

Also

, organisations and family members should do their best to help these

elders

adapt

in

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to

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online

services

.