Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?
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The advances made in
field
of Add an article
the field
technology
is
not equally shared by all age demographics. It is true that some Correct subject-verb agreement
are
elders
still struggle using
new Change the verb form
to use
technology
, however
in my opinion older peopleAdd the comma(s)
, in particular,
in particular
could benefit more in terms of convenience and this
could be achieved by organisations transitioning their service
primarily online.
Improved capability with using internet
engenders better life quality. Correct article usage
the internet
This
improvement would be immediately evident when having service
online. First
example is shopping for food online, during Change the article
The first
pandemic
lot of Correct article usage
the pandemic
elders
pushed
to use Add a missing verb
are pushed
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technology-based
technology based
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technology-based
services
in order to buy food. Ordering online benefits them in many ways which they can remain at home avoid
covid19 risks. Even after pandemic Fix the infinitive
to avoid
restrictions
there is a report that Add a comma
,restrictions
elderly
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the elderly
continues
to use online Change the verb form
continue
services
for their convenience. Second
example Change the article
The second
is apply
for Change the verb form
is applying
is applied
monthly
pension through Add an article
a monthly
government
application e-Correct article usage
the government
mongolia
, Change the capitalization
Mongolia
this
service
eased lot
of time and effort. Change the article
a lot
Usually
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,Usually
this
service
took about 1-2 days offline, but with government
application elders
can apply for it online while enjoying a
quality time with their grandchildren.
In order to encourage Correct article usage
apply
elderly
to use consumer electronics, organisations should continue Correct article usage
the elderly
support
consumers to engage online. Older individuals will need extra support with new Fix the infinitive
to support
technology
or service
, therefore
it would be easier for them if someone could demonstrate illustrative
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an illustrative
example
for them. Fix the agreement mistake
examples
For instance
, government
application called e-Correct article usage
a government
mongolia
created a help Change the capitalization
Mongolia
center
specifically for Change the spelling
centre
elders
to help them adapt
new Correct your spelling
adopt
services
on their phones. Companies today are already increasingly emphasising online orders by phasing out in-person discounts and physical stores they will compel the elderly to adapt to modern conveniences.
To conclude, older individuals can lead easier lives if they utilize the achievements in technology
that government
and companies Fix the agreement mistake
governments
already begun
to embrace. Add the auxiliary verb
began
have already begun
Also
, organisations and family members should do their best to help these elders
adapt in
online Change preposition
to
services
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