Write about the following topic: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over decades ago,
society
has undergone drastic
revolution. affecting our culture and beliefs. Add an article
a drastic
Advencements
in technology Correct your spelling
Advancements
also
has
had an impact on the world at large, to the extent that, even how an Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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individual
individaul
is valued in Correct your spelling
individual
society
is affected, not taking into consideration core values such
as a person
's Correct your spelling
integrity
intergrity
, Correct your spelling
integrity
honor
or kindness. Change the spelling
honour
This
essay will consider how a Correct your spelling
person's
peson's
worth is determined currently by his or her social status as compared with the past time.
Arguably, in my opinion, at Correct your spelling
person's
first
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,first
society
valued culture the most. People would thrive to gain positive
reputation in order to be valued in Add an article
a positive
society
, however
, it could not be said the same for present times where a person
's worth is determined by his or her educational level. The higher the level, the more you are recognised in every aspects
, even within the Change to a singular noun
aspect
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family
famly
.
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family
Moreover
, those whose families are well known and respected due to their wealth continue to gain worth in the eyes of society
. For instance
, a Minister's daughter might not possess the same qualities or good Correct your spelling
reputation
reputaion
as the minister, yet still, the public might value Correct your spelling
reputation
this
person
regardless of anything, as a result
of the family's background.
Furthermore
, in the olden days, trust and kindness preceeds
an individual, Correct your spelling
precedes
proceeds
however
, the amount of money in an individuals
bank Change noun form
individual's
accounts
talk on behalf of Fix the agreement mistake
account
this
person
in this
present times
. People are given titles, Fix the agreement mistake
time
respect
in and out of home,in accordance with their material possessions. Needless to say, now is, "your wealth shows your worth".
To sum up, Correct word choice
and respect
society
has changed in regards to how a person
is appreciated and given attention to, in my opinion, due to changes in culture and development in technology which in one way or the other could have negative
effect on Add an article
a negative
society
such
as rise
in social vices, corruption, just to mention few, since everyone Correct article usage
the rise
pursue
wealth to be worthed in Change the verb form
pursues
society
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