Write about the following topic: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Over decades ago,

society

has undergone

drastic

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revolution. affecting our culture and beliefs.

Advencements

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Advancements

in technology

also

has

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had an impact on the world at large, to the extent that, even how an

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individual

individaul

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individual

is valued in

society

is affected, not taking into consideration core values

such

as a

person

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integrity

intergrity

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integrity

honor

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or kindness.

This

essay will consider how a

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person's

peson's

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person's

worth is determined currently by his or her social status as compared with the past time. Arguably, in my opinion, at

first

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society

valued culture the most. People would thrive to gain

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reputation in order to be valued in

society

however

, it could not be said the same for present times where a

person

's worth is determined by his or her educational level. The higher the level, the more you are recognised in every

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, even within the

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family

famly

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family

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, those whose families are well known and respected due to their wealth continue to gain worth in the eyes of

society

For instance

, a Minister's daughter might not possess the same qualities or good

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reputation

reputaion

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reputation

as the minister, yet still, the public might value

this

person

regardless of anything,

as a result

of the family's background.

Furthermore

, in the olden days, trust and kindness

preceeds

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precedes

proceeds

an individual,

however

, the amount of money in an

individuals

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bank

accounts

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talk on behalf of

this

person

this

present

times

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. People are given titles,

respect

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and respect

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in and out of home,in accordance with their material possessions. Needless to say, now is, "your wealth shows your worth". To sum up,

society

has changed in regards to how a

person

is appreciated and given attention to, in my opinion, due to changes in culture and development in technology which in one way or the other could have

negative

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effect on

society

such

rise

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the rise

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in social vices, corruption, just to mention few, since everyone

pursue

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wealth to be worthed in

society

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Topic Vocabulary:

material possessions
social status
old-fashioned values
honour
kindness
trust
societal norms
social media platforms
value system
material wealth
personal relationships
societal well-being
timeless moral values
value-driven society

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