Write about the following topic: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Over decades ago,

society

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has undergone

drastic

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revolution. affecting our culture and beliefs.

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in technology

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had an impact on the world at large, to the extent that, even how an

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individual

individaul

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individual

is valued in

society

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is affected, not taking into consideration core values

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as a

person

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integrity

intergrity

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integrity

honor

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or kindness.

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essay will consider how a

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person's

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person's

worth is determined currently by his or her social status as compared with the past time. Arguably, in my opinion, at

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society

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valued culture the most. People would thrive to gain

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reputation in order to be valued in

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, it could not be said the same for present times where a

person

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's worth is determined by his or her educational level. The higher the level, the more you are recognised in every

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, even within the

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family

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family

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, those whose families are well known and respected due to their wealth continue to gain worth in the eyes of

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, a Minister's daughter might not possess the same qualities or good

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reputation

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reputation

as the minister, yet still, the public might value

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person

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regardless of anything,

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of the family's background.

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, in the olden days, trust and kindness

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an individual,

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, the amount of money in an

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bank

accounts

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talk on behalf of

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person

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times

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. People are given titles,

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in and out of home,in accordance with their material possessions. Needless to say, now is, "your wealth shows your worth". To sum up,

society

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has changed in regards to how a

person

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is appreciated and given attention to, in my opinion, due to changes in culture and development in technology which in one way or the other could have

negative

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effect on

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such

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in social vices, corruption, just to mention few, since everyone

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wealth to be worthed in

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

material possessions
social status
old-fashioned values
honour
kindness
trust
societal norms
social media platforms
value system
material wealth
personal relationships
societal well-being
timeless moral values
value-driven society

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Write about the following topic: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Writing Task 2 In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reason for this ? How can people research this ?

Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the govrnment's reseponsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that importing movies and TV programmes from other countries is better for country . Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Do you agree or disagree?