Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.other however say that this would have little effect on public health and other majores are required.discuss both this view and give yourown opinion.

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Good
health
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is an interesting topic for the public. Almost everyone wants to attain good
health
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however
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, few
people
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are actually willing to put
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efforts
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to accomplish
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. Governments in various countries
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the world are setting up
health
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programmes and other avenues to ensure
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citizens do have good
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. Some governments even have policies which
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free
health
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care to
people
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living in their country. With regard to the topic for discussion, increasing
sports
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facilities
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do have 2 different sides both positive and negative.
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of
people
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at
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a particular locality
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depending
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depending
on their culture, attitudes,
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enthusiasm
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enthusiasm
and so on
engages
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in physical activities as a way to keep
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health
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. Some go for long walks, jogging, skipping ropes, gym, as well as
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engage
enage
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engage
in various sporting activities
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as football. These engagements do help them burn calories, ensure proper circulation and overall keep them fit and healthy. Due to
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the lack
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of easy access to
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amenities
ameneties
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amenities
,
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most
nost
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most
individuals are reluctant to engage in most physical
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activities
activites
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activities
with
reasons
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the reasons
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being that; they may be motivated by others at sporting
facilities
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,
enjoy
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and enjoy
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group workouts, just to mention a few. Again,
people
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do enjoy taking time out of their busy schedules to watch and
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witness
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various
variois
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various
sporting
event
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events
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they
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like the most.
Health
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is not just concerned with the physical or physiological aspects,
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its
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it's
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inclusive of
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the mental
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and emotional
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aspects
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of the individual.
This
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is to add to the
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argument
argyment
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argument
that, if someone gets happy watching a sport he/she enjoys the most,
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the
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then
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he/she will have
a
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good mental and emotional
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contributing to the overall
wellbeing
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well-being
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of the individual. If these
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are critically taken into account,
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one can be convinced increasing the number of
sports
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facilities
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can have a greater influence
in
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on
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the
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apply
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overall public
health
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.
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Not withstanding
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, increasing
sports
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facilities
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may have little effect on public
health
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. Not so long ago, there was a
pandermic
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pandemic
where many individuals suffered
of
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ill
health
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and most ended up dying. The spread of
the
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apply
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COVID-19 was
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as
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a result of contact with other
people
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who may be
harboring
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the disease, various
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proved
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prooved
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proved
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that crowded areas were a contributing factor
for
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to
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the spread. Crowded areas
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sporting
facilities
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where
people
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either go to watch and
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witness
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withness
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witness
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various sporting events or actually engage in sporting events.
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, there are other infectious diseases and
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ailments
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that
people
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can contract at
sport
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sports
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facilities
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such
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as
cold
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colds
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,
hepatitis
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and hepatitis
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B, just to mention a few. To add more, there are many communities where there is easy access to
sport
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facilities
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but right after
engagement
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the engagement
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, the diets and other behaviours
and
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an
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individual puts up does not add a positive contribution to his/her physical and physiological
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. Looking at analysis from recent
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research
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on COVID-19 and other modes of spread of diseases, one can
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that increasing
sports
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facilities
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will have little influence on public
health
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. In my own opinion, everything has its own merits and demerits as stated in the discussion above. I will conclude that increasing
sports
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facilities
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will have
insignificant
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effect on public
health
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due to the fact that attaining good personal
health
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depends largely on the individual by modifying lifestyle, exercising,
seeking
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and seeking
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early healthcare amongst other positive behaviours.
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