You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Mr or Madam, My name is Artem Altukhov and I am starting the Computer Science course in September. I have never studied at Montreal State college and, to be honest, I have never been to Montreal before,

that is

why I would like to clarify some details to be fully aware of some issues.

Firstly

, I wanted to make sure that the room I am going to rent will have all the necessary parameters. Basically, It is crucially that the unit has a fast internet connection and good soundproof qualities. The point is that I have problems with my sleep if there are noisy neighbours. All other aspects are not really important to me, so please let me know if there are any issues with the internet and the noise.

Secondly

, I just wanted to get some basic community information. As I see it takes approximately 40 minutes to get to the college by bus. Just in case, could you please recommend any other ways to go to or from the college? If there are several options, which one is the best? Please let me know if I

also

need to provide you with some information. Yours faithfully, Artem.

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