You recently went on a sightseeing tour which you did not enjoy. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter: explain why you chose that particular tour explain what you did not like about the tour suggest two ways in which the tour could be improved

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to bring it to your kind consideration that I am not satisfied with the

tour

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service provided by your

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, TravelPedia. I have always been fascinated

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the country, India and its ancient civilization and wanted to know about the historical monuments of North India. My friend, Ramesh who is from India has suggested

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your

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company

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. I have

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searched online and your

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has great reviews from the customers. I booked a three-day

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with your

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for cities like Delhi, Agra and Jaipur. The

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guide who accompanied us was not very knowledgeable. I do not think that he was aware of all the places where he was supposed to guide us through. I do not want to deny the fact that your travel

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provided good food and accommodation but unfortunately, the

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itself fell short of my expectation. Needless to say, we missed many monuments and places. And because our guide hardly knew the Hindi language, we had a tough time communicating with the local people. I would like to suggest training your guides so that they will have relevant information about the place.

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, it would be great if they have command of local languages. I am hoping for your kind consideration of my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Alan Alex

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